can I post my parodie here?

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First,let's talk about the concept: documentary in parodie form.

My first trie is about the project/prototype and I used der untergang clip for the first one on the panther mit 8,8cm,I put my source and complementary link in the description. all of them are in english because I want to improve myself and if you see some fault in them,please signal them on the comment. You can also add complementary info on the comment of my video or correct me if I am wrong.

Thanks for your permission to post them here if I can.
 
Other parodies were posted here before, too, e.g. videos via Youtube (I remember the one about
the development of the Bradley), or drawings.
So, why not ?
 
voila
https://youtu.be/jC12Hv_cz8A
https://youtu.be/ufhcxGsHqCA
https://youtu.be/1GoU9AjFIw8
https://youtu.be/_QbjRRjPPI0
All are in english and if you see mistake,please signal them in the comment and you can also add complementary source .
 
To be Frank, honest, these are not polished articles and appear more like unfinished thoughts. Perhaps refine them with a more cogent themes.
 
Here are two new parodie,one on a french tank project and one on a porsche project:
https://youtu.be/C7mFBc0yYsM
https://youtu.be/WLVjx4YjZQc
 
I watch all those Parodies here

maybe because i'm german or because the German Voice are yelling another content as ze subtitles
my verdict is
https://youtu.be/IlMoDUBIg00
 
To be honest they either need to improve or stop-. Just my ten pence worth.
 
Ok, may be it's time to end it here. The thread is a bit far to the forum's subjects, even placed here in the "bar".
 
"And how can I improve them?"

"To be Frank, honest, these are not polished articles and appear more like unfinished thoughts. Perhaps refine them with a more cogent themes".

There is a lack of direction, goal or intent. You are basically cutting and pasting a single incomplete point over a screaming background. To be honest with you, they are the worst I have seen. Try a single line of development and follow it through to completion. Or stop. My thoughts are that these memes are so poor that you need to stop.
 
Foo Fighter said:
"And how can I improve them?"

"To be Frank, honest, these are not polished articles and appear more like unfinished thoughts. Perhaps refine them with a more cogent themes".

There is a lack of direction, goal or intent. You are basically cutting and pasting a single incomplete point over a screaming background. To be honest with you, they are the worst I have seen. Try a single line of development and follow it through to completion. Or stop. My thoughts are that these memes are so poor that you need to stop.
from what I understand,you don't like the untergang meme?
PS: sorry,but I wont stop.
 

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